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Aug. 13th, 2008
I'm putting this up here in hopes that somebody's got some advice. It's about 2700 words.
The kissing scene herein--well, it's more intense than I'd expected it to be. I think I've kept it age-appropriate, but what do I know? I've not been eleven in twenty-one years, and I think I may have a very skewed idea of these things, because I didn't kiss anyone until I was sixteen.
Also, Dennisud suggested on Ficwad that I should consider changing the title. Any thoughts? I'm not f-locking this cos there's nothing to hide, just things I don't want to put up on Ficwad or Pit o Voles just yet.
ETA: I added in a Fleur-Luna kiss. (16 August 08)
( click here for fic )
The kissing scene herein--well, it's more intense than I'd expected it to be. I think I've kept it age-appropriate, but what do I know? I've not been eleven in twenty-one years, and I think I may have a very skewed idea of these things, because I didn't kiss anyone until I was sixteen.
Also, Dennisud suggested on Ficwad that I should consider changing the title. Any thoughts? I'm not f-locking this cos there's nothing to hide, just things I don't want to put up on Ficwad or Pit o Voles just yet.
ETA: I added in a Fleur-Luna kiss. (16 August 08)
( click here for fic )